Title and Credits

I decided to put my title at the end of my film because it shows that its the end of not just the film but of the relationship between the two characters.
It is also the first words you hear spoken in the dialogue.

When I showed my first cut to my focus group the suggestion was made that I combine my credits and my last shot of the car:

I decided to do this as I have enough black space around the car for the credits to be clear and it will showcase more of my skills.