This is my first cut of my footage, I haven't added in my animation yet but where there is a empty frame is where I will have a shot of my hydra so you can get an idea of how it will look.
I don't like how it turned out, I think it looks to student made and the quality of the combination of the filming, location, costume and acting makes it seem unprofessional. So I have come up with another idea for a short film which should work better with the resources that I have at my disposal.
I got a focus group together and asked them to write a list of things they liked and things they didn't. Feedback from the group:
Like
The change into fantasy/medieval
The costumes
Range of shots
Sword fighting
Sound Effects
The premise of it
The bullies reaction at the end kept it lighthearted
Dislike
Jump cuts don't flow very well
Script is repetitive
It feels kind of awkward
The young boy playing with a teddy looks a bit odd especially as it then turns into a baby
The background noise in most of the shots is distracting
The teddy into baby was a bit bizarre and fast
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